REMIX 9.1

Strings puppeteers pull amount to involuntary acts of nothingness
Limbs force mechanical movement

Perceived control traps minds in an L7

Persistent attempts produce groupthink behavior

They dream constantly of ways to belittle

Yet should be motivating

Ice sickles flowing through veins

Leaks from pores

Puppet or puppeteer, controller or controlled

The revolt should come as no surprise

You choose

Your skin is too thin

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I took advantage of the energy of #9 Haiku 1 and intermingled lines from #3.  This is still a work in progress so I’ll update it as the mood strikes.  This was the piece I lost which I ranted about a previous post.  I tried to recover from memory with the two lines I had saved but the feeling was lost.