REMIX 9.1

REMIX 9.1
Strings puppeteers pull amount to involuntary acts of nothingness
Limbs force mechanical movement
Perceived control traps minds in an L7
Persistent attempts produce groupthink behavior
They dream constantly of ways to belittle
Yet should be motivating
Ice sickles flowing through veins
Leaks from pores
Puppet or puppeteer, controller or controlled
The revolt should come as no surprise
You choose
Your skin is too thin
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I took advantage of the energy of #9 Haiku 1 and intermingled lines from #3.  This is still a work in progress so I’ll update it as the mood strikes.  This was the piece I lost which I ranted about a previous post.  I tried to recover from memory with the two lines I had saved but the feeling was lost.

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